Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Poem - i count

i count
people
cats
bikes
money etc

assign them
stories

but these
are
just me
going on
about them

3 comments:

The Rambling Taoist said...

But they DO have stories. Everyone and everything has a story all its own.

CM said...

Just not the ones I'm telling.

CM said...

So to fix it

"but these
stories are
just me
going on
about them "

becomes

"but these
are
just me
going on
about them"